Feedback from 'CONNECT' rough cut

Teacher Feedback

What they liked about my magazine

• collums on the double page spread
• image on the front cover and the mise en scene carried throughout
• good photo on the front cover and use of colour scheme throughout
• the use of colour and branding
• manipulation of models

What they think i could improve for my my final magazine

Front Cover

• check research -layout and fonts need adjusting/improving
• logo could be stronger and changed to suit genre
• more details included on the front cover
• Adele image is to similar on front cover to on contents page

Contents Page

• contents page is a bit messy - use constant fonts
• photos could be stronger especially lighting on the band image (too much white balance on the photo)

Double Page Spread

• photo is slightly out of focus on the double page spread
• finish article after interview
• "ADELE" on the double page spread doesnt fit the style
• try to combine photo and text 

                                                  

Peer Feedback

What they liked about my magazine

• constant colour scheme
• images are well styled and look like the artists they are trying to be. They also show a variety in different shots 
• text on the double page spread is the right size
• the way the article is written, including the use of the collumns
• consistant genre
• the way page is layed out

What they think i could improve for my my final magazine

front cover

• check spelling and grammatical errors (dont forget capital letters)
• make the text on the front cover smaller
• re cut out the front cover photo and blend with the background
• move about the writing enabeling readers to read the "Tunstal" over the dress of the cover artist
• wider variety of text on the cover?

Contents Page

• make the text smaller and add more
• the Adele image on the contents page looks stretched - resize or retake
• too many plain backgrounds in photos
• keep fonts constant
• the page is slightly disjointed?

Double Page Spread

• make the space inbertween "welcome to the party of the legends" smaller
• adele title (font) doesnt fit with the layout
• too much left over white space which needs to be filled
• make the quote's bigger within the text